What’s it about?

A friend recently asked our monthly writing group for advice about a novel idea that he had been struggling with. His specific question was whether the story was worth finishing. I asked him what the story was about.

He began explaining about the story’s setting, the history of the planet, and a number of complications. If I reproduced it here, it would have gone on for several paragraphs.

At a point when he paused for breath, I interrupted to say, “You haven’t told me what the story is, yet. All you’ve given me are complications. Who is your protagonist? And what problem is he struggling with?”

Another friend participating in the conversation put my same question a different way. Referring to a story we had just finished critiquing. “That story, even though it was only 10,000 words, had a lot of complications and subplots, right? But what the story is about is, ‘Ian gets suckered into delivering a stranger’s ashes to a temple.'”

That summary evokes a story. You don’t have to know who Ian is. You don’t have to know exactly what culture he lives in. You don’t have to know what sort of temple it is. “Character gets suckered into delivering someone’s mortal remains somewhere,” sets up a dramatic situation.

What will make the story interesting and uniquely yours are, indeed, all those background details—the character’s personal history, the importance his society places on funeral rites, the character’s acceptance or rejection of those expectations, any difficulty or surprises he or she encounters on the way, and so on—that make the tale an entertaining or enlightening experience.

But the spine that holds it all together is that central dilemma. In that particular example, the word “suckered” tells you that he is at least somewhat reluctant to be doing it. It also tells you that the person who tricked him into it must have had reasons they were even more reluctant to undertake the journey. The fact that it is someone’s mortal remains and there is a temple involved hint at some of the kinds of difficulties the character may face along the way.

When I asked the original question, this is what I was really looking for: did the author know what the spine of his story was? Exactly what the spine is doesn’t matter when asking whether the story was worth finishing. Neither do all of those other details, background information, and complications tell us whether the story is worth finishing.

What tells us whether this is a story that you need to tell, is if that central nugget is at the forefront of your mind when thinking of what the story is about.

From all the information he gave us, I could come up with such a central, one sentence, summary of what that story might be about: John receives a message from the heavens that reveals his whole life is a lie.

But that’s the conflict I pulled out of it. If that isn’t the story which my friend wants to tell—nay, needs to tell—then it isn’t his story.

And even after all that, the original question of whether the story is worth pursuing has to be answered by the author. Does re-evaluating the unfinished work he has now make some sort of central dilemma jump out at him? Perhaps a completely different central dilemma: maybe the story he needs to tell is the story of John’s sister, who is dealing with her brother’s sudden onset of insanity, then begins to wonder if he really is insane; or perhaps it is the story of a city elder who has to deal with this fanatic, John, who is trying to destroy civilization.

If such a dilemma jumps out at him, if he feels the need to tell that story, then yes, absolutely, it’s worth finishing. Otherwise, it’s probably time to set it aside to work on something else.

4 thoughts on “What’s it about?

  1. This may be my problem with my current story, although I think I know what the primary plot is. The very first line of the story as currently written is: Vashti Ahandra wanted out. So that’s at least the jumping-off point and main thread of the story, Vashti’s attempt to leave the ship she’s currently working for, and become a singer again. But I have so many other things going on that I’m not always sure which scenes really need to exist or if they help tell the full story or not. I have a lot of scenes from Lo-Pan’s pov, he’s Vashti’s former manager and what he does to try and manipulate her directly affects the outcome of her own story, so I think that needs to be told. And I have some scenes with Captain Taga, whose death complicates things, and since she’s double-crossed the Iktome I have scenes involving Chakhan and Aleks and Art. Then I wrote a scene from Klause’s pov yesterday, he’s one of the possible killers of Captain Taga, but it’s the only scene directly from his pov… and I even wondered if adding scenes with the local police involving the two murders that take place would add to the story, but really, I think I need to streamline things rather than make them more complicated.

    I’m also second-guessing who the killer of Captain Taga really is. ^_^

  2. I love your writing technique posts– this one is excellent.

    One request that I would deferentially ask (it is -your- blog, after all): could you tag these posts in the subject with something like, “Writing: “? I don’t always manage to get over to Fontfolly to read everything and I hadn’t realized that you don’t always link posts to your LJ (where I primarily hang). I don’t always have time to read every post and I would hate to miss these. Good stuff!

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